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Hey, Michael here.
We’re back with another edition of The DTC Letters.
In today's newsletter, we are going to over:
The rest of the design breakdown from last week
The A/B test idea of the week
The most interesting links I’ve found this week
If you haven’t already, check out this new training I posted on YouTube about Creating a HIGH Converting Post Purchase Email Flow (Klaviyo Tutorial (link) or this 110 page FREE training guide I wrote on everything related to campaign emails (link)
A/B Split Test Idea of The Week
Split Test for an AdSumo Digital Client
The Test:
The image above is from a campaign test we ran (are are running for the next 5 or so campaigns to get a good sample size).
Both emails are showing the “Luxurious Functionality” of these high end hand bags and were sent to the 30 day engaged list while excluding high bounce rate suppressed subscribers.
Version A is using lifestyle product images to showcase the bags. The Founder of the brand said these have always done better for the brand.
Version B is using just the product images to showcase the bags.
What did we learn?
We saw a 19% lift in click rate on the product only images. (opposite of what the Founder believed to be true).
I can see how this can be true because in my opinion, I like the product only images too.
Why?
The emails feel less cluttered and my focus is drawn the the hand bags rather than the person wearing it.
So since the hero images are the same (lifestyle shot of the bags), the product only email still gives the feeling of “I want to be my best self like the woman in this picture” yet keeps a minimal and luxury feel in the body of the email.
However, we are testing this some more to ensure we get a large enough sample size. The last thing we want to do is jump to conclusions and switch up our whole approach on data from one email.
Highly recommend this test for your brand (or clients 😉) campaign emails.
The Best Links
Here are some of the best links I've found since last time I emailed you:
Examples
A great example of a REALLY BAD EMAIL campaign, don’t be like this brand (link)
Videos
Tweets
Now Let’s Breakdown an Email Design
The Email
Remember the email above from last week? We did a design breakdown of the hero image section. If you missed that one click here (link)
It’s the Welcome Email #1 of a brand I audited last week.
The goal of the email: To get the new subscriber to use their 10% off discount code and intro them into the brand.
What we are doing today
In todays email, we are going to be breaking down the rest of the email (the body) and talking about what they could do differently to generate more clicks.
More clicks = More revenue
After all, this is the highest revenue producing email in all of their flows with the potential to generate a quarter million dollars a year like some of our clients are generating with their welcome emails.
Let’s get into the breakdown…
The Body of the Email
This brand is making one of the most common mistakes I see.
Too many ideas in one email
The highest converting emails are always centered around:
1 Idea
1 Concept
1 Goal
Why?
You lose the readers focus when you are talking about 4 different things and linking out to 4 different places.
Keep in mind, the only goal of this email is to get them to use their 10% off code and a super brief intro to the brand. (you don’t want to talk yourself out of a sale is the idea behind this)
Yet this brand mentions:
A video the reader can go click and watch
Best sellers to look at
Mentions they can go view the FAQs page on the website
AND has their social media icons at the bottom of the email
They have successfully confused the reader and by this point in the email the reader has clicked off.
The State in Which Someone Reads an Email
What they didn’t think about is the state someone is in when they are reading the email.
I will write a whole email on this topic soon but here’s a the point I’m trying to get across.
This person just signed up to email marketing from your stores pop-up. They received their code on the site but did not purchase. This person then went to their email and opened it.
pause…
What do they need to see to get them to convert?
They are already interested since they subscribed and were on the site
They know a bit about what you sell, enough to have subscribed
They knew there was a chance they might buy so they wanted the discount code just incase
Soooo what they need now is a reminder of:
Why they were interested
That they received a code and should use it
And a brief introduction to the brand to provide a line or two of added context to why they should care about your brand.
This will get them back to the site and typing in their discount code.
I hope that was valuable!
-Michael
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